tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20983136.post2764481146388520269..comments2024-03-27T09:30:03.123-07:00Comments on The Cellophane Queen: Writing Tips: Opening LinesCellophane Queenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08166797508899835493noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20983136.post-87730400232788566602013-07-06T09:15:41.804-07:002013-07-06T09:15:41.804-07:00Hi Nevin: Thanks for visiting. That's a good o...Hi Nevin: Thanks for visiting. That's a good opening line. Like Lorrie's, you've provided genre and a whole lot about Aeve. I would hazard a dystopian SF. Cellophane Queenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166797508899835493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20983136.post-86321638179327406362013-07-05T15:23:15.487-07:002013-07-05T15:23:15.487-07:00Aeve picked up the pamphlet titled "E.A.R.T.H...Aeve picked up the pamphlet titled "E.A.R.T.H." and hugged her newborn son closer to her chest.<br /><br />Great post, Mavra! Thanks for a great focal point for today. :)<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08429510870967178001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20983136.post-37701736877835750832013-07-05T13:35:51.947-07:002013-07-05T13:35:51.947-07:00Thanks for stopping by Marian. Wish you would have...Thanks for stopping by Marian. Wish you would have left a catchy first line. I know you have them.<br /><br />Lorrie: That line leaves no doubt of the genre and provides a ton of info. It's practically a prologue unto itself.Cellophane Queenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166797508899835493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20983136.post-21161943340919024002013-07-05T12:55:28.872-07:002013-07-05T12:55:28.872-07:00Rockets from the Minister’s space patrol blasted t...Rockets from the Minister’s space patrol blasted the trees to the east. <br /><br />That's mine so far but may be changed. lol. Probably will be changed.<br />I really liked your 'Kat' character, and what a character she is. I followed her adventures and enjoyed every one.<br /><br />Nice post, Marva.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00296793847863721845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20983136.post-72535157873013276942013-07-05T11:46:29.347-07:002013-07-05T11:46:29.347-07:00Excellent posts, thanks for the info.Excellent posts, thanks for the info.Marian Lanouettehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11989754229732790216noreply@blogger.com