Thursday, August 11, 2011

MAD Characters - Ray

Ray Johnson owns the Jack and Jill Diner in the little town of Rosewood, OR. He had been a good friend of Salvadore Vasco, a Basque shepherd, until Vasco disappeared. Ray knew Salvadore couldn't just get lost; the old man knew all too well the rocky hills leading toward the Steen Mountains.

When Kam McBride is named Salvadore's executor after seven years he'd been missing, one of the first people she meets in Rosewood is Ray. After all, she was hungry after being lost in the high desert country and that cute Deputy Mitch invited her for a bite to eat.

Ray's a crusty old guy who stays in Rosewood because his wife is buried there, and he wants to stay near her. That, and he's got the only place to eat in the tiny town. Bev scoffs at Ray's cooking ability, but just about everybody else in the area eats at the Jack and Jill's regularly.

Excerpt: Kam meets Ray for the first time.

When she entered the diner, she had to smile. From the checkerboard black and white tiles on the floor to the slow-spinning fan on the ceiling, it looked like a stage set for Grease. Red vinyl chairs and booth seats were tucked close to green Formica-covered tables. Stainless napkin holders and salt-n-pepper shakers nestled between plastic catsup and mustard bottles on each table.

Mitch sat at the counter talking to an older man wearing a sea green apron and white chef’s hat. His bare arms, although skinny, seemed to be all gristle and muscle. She briefly wondered if Mitch and the cook were related. Both had dark skin and black hair, although the old man’s showed a lot of gray. The roman noses, high cheekbones, and strong jaws were similar enough for them to be father and son.

She slid onto a stool next to Mitch and smiled. She picked up the tall, water-beaded glass of iced tea waiting for her and took a long swallow. “God, that’s good. Thanks.”

“Kam, this is Ray Johnson. Ray, Kam McBride.”

Ray reached out his gnarled hand. The shake was gentle but firm enough to hint at the old man’s wiry strength.

“You can call me Ray, but you doesn’t have to call me Johnson.”

Mitch winked at her, and Kam twitched an eyebrow. “Um, okay. I’ll just call you Ray.” She tipped her head toward Mitch. “Are you two related? You sure look alike.”

Ray and Mitch both broke into laughter. Mitch answered. “No relation, but I’d be proud.”

The old man grinned, exposing a little gold behind a white partial plate. “I think that’s ‘cause Mitch here is half Paiute, and I’m half Basque. I do believe the two tribes came from the same beginnin’s.”

Kam studied Mitch’s face, a very nice face at that. Returning her attention to Ray, she asked, “Did you know Salvadore Vasco? He was Basque, too.”

“Yep. Him and me were good friends ’til he went missin’.” The old man shook his head slowly. “A damned shame, that.”

“Missing? I thought he was dead.”

“That’s the thing. Seven years gone by, so they’re declarin’ him to be dead.” Ray paused. “So, you’re his last relative?”

“I am, although I didn’t even know about him until a few weeks ago when I got the letter from the court. But my mom recognized the name. My father was related to him. Second cousin twice removed or something like that.”

Ray rubbed his chin. “So, you never met Salvadore?”

“No. Tell me about him. Were you friends for a long time?”

Oh, sure! Years ’n years. He’d come in town maybe once a week for supplies an’ always stopped here for a meal. I can almos’ see him walkin’ down the street usin’ his shepherd’s crook for a cane. The work stove him up some. You know, sheep herdin’ ain’t as easy as it sounds.”

Kam nodded. Finally, she’d met somebody who actually knew Salvadore Vasco. “What else can you tell me? What happened when he went missing?”

Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Excerpt Wednesday - The Rashomon Effect

The recent articles on the MuseItUp's June Conference blog (http://museituppublishing.blogspot.com/ ) are loaded with wonderful information. The last in the series is on switching point of view (POV).

One multiple POV method not mentioned is called the Rashomon effect because of the excellent way it was used in the Japanese film, Rashomon. A Wiki article lists several more examples of the technique used in popular culture.

This quote from Wiki is quite good: The Rashomon effect is the effect of the subjectivity of perception on recollection, by which observers of an event are able to produce substantially different but equally plausible accounts of it.

In "Missing, Assumed Dead" several characters are telling the main character, Kam McBride, what had happened in the past (a flashback). To avoid simple telling, I switched to another character's POV. I delineated these flashbacks into scenes, and even made them italic to set them off from the narrative.

The fun part is that the characters are relating the same incident to Kam, but each one has a slightly different view of the events, usually making themselves a bit more heroic than the other people in the same scene. This allows the reader to be suspect of the truthfulness of the characters.

It's not my original idea. That's why it already has a name, Rashomon Effect, in honor of the great Samurai movie of the 50s, directed by Akira Kurosawa and starring the wonderful Toshirō Mifune.

In the film, a crime occurs, and the film maker presents it four times, each from a different character's POV. Needless to say, the versions of the events vary, sometimes wildly, from each other. By the end of the film, you still don't know exactly what happened since none of the characters can be fully believed.

In addition to the contradictory retelling of the events by the different characters, there are two additional flashbacks. By the time they appear in the book, I hope the reader will be looking at everyone with suspicion.

Here are a couple of excerpts from "Missing, Assumed Dead," illustrating the Rashomon Effect in action. Two characters, Ray and George, describe their meeting to discuss the disappearance of Salvadore Vasco, the missing man of the title. Same event, but a big difference in the perception.

Ray's Story:

Ray went up the three steps into the Courthouse and turned left into George’s office. The self-appointed police chief sat behind his desk with his boots propped up on it. He raised his eyes from the Zane Grey novel he’d been reading.

“Hey there, Ray. What can I do you out of?” The fat man’s belly jiggled when he laughed at his own stale joke.

“I come about Salvadore.”

“Vasco?”

Ray shifted his weight from one foot to the other and glanced at the chair on his side of the desk. His legs ached, but he didn’t want to settle in for a long chat. George tended to run on some. “Only Salvadore in these parts far as I know. Anyways, has a habit of comin’ to town once a week, but he didn’t come last week nor this ’un.”

“So, what do you want me to do about it? Man’s gotta right to come to town or not.”

“True thing, but you know us old fellas like to stick to a schedule. It ain’t like him to not come in. I think someone oughta go up there and check on him.”

George glanced at the copy of Riders of the Purple Sage on his desk. “Why don’t you go, Ray? You’re his friend.”

“Yep, but he’d think I was buttin’ into his bizness if he’s okay. If you go, you can say sumthin’ about looking for someone else or what not.”

“So, I should lie to him but really just be checkin’ on his welfare, eh?”

“Yep. That’s what I’m thinkin’.”

George's Story

George sat in his office reading the latest statewide all-points bulletins for wanted criminals and stolen vehicles. Old man Ray from the Jack and Jill’s came in looking worried.

“Chief, I ain’t see Salvadore in a couple a weeks. I thought I’d better tell ya, since you’re the police and all.”

“Now, don’t get yourself all worked up, Ray. Old Salvadore prob’ly just don’t want to eat no more of your burnt burgers.”

Ray shook his head. “I don’t know what to do, George. Can you go check up on him?”

“Why sure, Ray. I’ll head up tomorrow morning for a welfare check.” George stood and walked around his desk. He patted Ray’s shoulder to comfort him. “You go on home and don’t fret. George is on the job.”

Tuesday, August 09, 2011

Visit these blogs to win


All the "Missing, Assumed Dead" tour blogs are posted. You have a few days to go to each one to leave a comment if you haven't already. A winner for an ebook will be selected by the blog owners for their own blog.

Every person who commented anywhere, including on this blog, will have their name thrown into a virtual hat to select a Grand Prize Winner. Yes, you can win on an individual blog and still win a Grand Prize.

Here are all the blog addresses you can visit all month long to leave a comment. On August 15th, the bloggers will choose their individual winners. They'll send the emails of the winners to me. I'll also collect all the commenter names (and hopefully email addies) for the Grand Prize drawing. I will announce the winner on August 23rd.

So, click away and add a comment to any and all of these fine blogs:

7/29 Teen Word Factory
http://www.teenwordfactory.com/2011/07/how-i-almost-got-killed-by-cute-guy.html

7/30 Penny Ehrenkranz
http://pennylockwoodehrenkranz.blogspot.com/2011/07/interview-with-author-marva-dasef.html

7/31 Rosanne Dowell
http://roseannedowellauthor.blogspot.com/2011/07/welcome-marva-dasef.html

8/1 Charlotte Volnek
http://www.ckvolnek.com/4/post/2011/08/newly-released-novelmissing-assumed-dead.html

8/2 Barbara Ehrentreu
http://barbaraehrentreu.blogspot.com/2011/08/meet-marva-dasef-virtual-blog-tour-for.html

8/3 Lorrie Struiff
http://struiff.wordpress.com/marvas-new-release/

8/4 L.J. Sellers
http://ljsellers.com/wordpress/marva-dasaf  (that's Dasef, but I won't quibble)

8/5 A.M. Roelke
http://thewritinglifeforme.blogspot.com/2011/08/missing-assumed-dead-by-marva-dasef.html

8/6 Lisa Lickel
http://livingourfaithoutloud.blogspot.com/2011/08/marva-dasef-mystery-writer.html

Penny Ehrenkranz Tours the Blogosphere

To introduce her new book, "Love Delivery," Penny will be visiting a passel of blogs this month. She has quite a schedule set up! Visit these blogs and comment. You know the drill. She'll join me right here on the 25th. I'm squeezing her in between a fascinating essay on Pablo Picasso and a comment from my character, Kam McBride.

LOVE DELIVERY BLOG TOUR – Penny Lockwood Ehrenkranz, MuseItUp Publishing

July 29 -- Lin Holmes, http://linsownblog.blogspot.com/

August 12 – Ginger Simpson, http://mizging.blogspot.com/

August 13 -- Elaine Cantrell, http://elainepcantrell.blogspot.com/

August 14 -- Janie Franz, http://janiefranz.wordpress.com/

Jami Bevans, http://ciaragold.blogspot.com/

August 15 -- Joanne Tropello, http://joannetroppello.weebly.com/blog.html

August 16 -- Long and Short Reviews, http://www.longandshortreviews.com/

August 17 -- Nicola Sheridan, http://www.magicalgains.blogspot.com/

Celia Yearly, http://www.celiayeary.blogspot.com/

Long and Short Reviews: http://www.longandshortreviews.com chatting on their forum

August 18 -- Su Halfwerk, http://www.suhalfwerk.blogspot.com/

August 19 -- Lin Holmes, http://linsownblog.blogspot.com/

August 20 -- Janice Seagraves, http://ladyjanice.blogspot.com/

August 21 -- Joylene Butler, http://cluculzwriter.blogspot.com/

August 22 -- Roseanne Dowell, http://roseannedowellauthor.blogspot.com/

August 23 -- Tina Donahue, http://www.tinadonahue.com/blog

August 24 -- Grace Elliott, http://graceelliot-author.blogspot.com/p/guest-blogger-spot.html

August 25 -- Marva Dasef, http://mgddasef.blogspot.com/

August 29 -- P.L. Parker, http://www.plparker.blogspot.com/

Monday, August 08, 2011

Mystery Month at Book Products and More

Missing, Assumed Dead will be featured on the Mystery Month at Book Products and More.

Leave a comment to be included in the prize drawings.

Sunday, August 07, 2011

It's A Crime Sunday - Detective Rita Muldova

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Rita is the brainchild of Lorrie Unites-Struiff. Created for Lorrie's first book, "Gypsy Crystal," Rita combines her inherent magic of her Roma heritage with street smart detective skills. Read about Lorrie's books and stories on her Wordpress site: http://struiff.wordpress.com/
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Hello,

My name is Rita Muldova. Allow me to tell you a bit about my early life.

I come from a long line of Roma people, some call us gypsies. My parents came to the States before I was born. At first we traveled with relatives and other families of migrant workers, setting up our pop-up trailer wherever our group could find work. My mom, Anna, would tell fortunes around the campfire in the evening while dad whittled away carving small toys for the kids. Though it was hard work, it was also a happy, carefree life.

Many in our family tree have psychic gifts, but of course custom forbids we use them for relatives, only for friends and strangers. And my mom has the most powerful gifts of our clan. I swear she has built-in radar.

When I was thirteen, Dad was offered a job as a carpenter and decided we had enough of roaming the States, so he settled us down in one place. They enrolled me in school, but with home schooling, I was ahead of the public classes.

Keyport, PA. is a nice little town, upriver from Pittsburgh, and nestled along the Monongahela River. We bought a three-bedroom trailer and lived in the rental park.

Then life got a bit tough for me. The kids in school nicknamed me “Gypsy Girl” and I was considered an oddity because of my Roma customs and traditions. A lot of jeers and taunts came my way. But, I coped. I’m damn proud of my Roma blood.

Two years later, Dad was killed in an auto accident while driving mom to market. Mom had this strong premonition, but Dad refused to heed her warning.

Well, life just got tougher after that. Money was scarce. Mom wrote to her older brother, Uncle Dragus, who still lived in Romania and had a small bakery. He traveled across the big pond and moved in with us. He opened another bakery and did fairly well. To supplement our money problems, Mom put out her shingle and did her crystal ball thing. Let me tell you, my mom is right on the nose with her psychic powers and she helped a lot of people. At times, she’s downright spooky.

When I left for college, Mom and Uncle Dragus borrowed money to open a quaint little restaurant in a theme mall near Keyport, sold the trailer, and moved into to the apartment above the restaurant. Mom still reads palms, tea leaves, and Uncle plays the sweetest violin music.

After college, I went to the police academy. Upon graduation, mom gave me a mystical amulet that has been handed down through our maternal bloodline. She said it would protect and help me with my chosen career path. The crystal amulet allows me to see in the eyes of a corpse the last image they saw before death. Well, let me tell you, this amulet propelled my career on the fast track. Of course I kept it a secret, but with more studying, making detective in our homicide division, I had to tell my chief about it. He freaked out, but promised to handle it discreetly.

That brings us to today. A serial killer is on the loose in my town and targeting prostitutes. What has me so confused is, the crystal seems to have lost its power. For some reason, it’s only showing me the person the deceased had seen before the killer struck.

Forensics can’t help on this one. They are as confused as the department. Matt Boulet of the FBI has been sent from Voodoo City, New Orleans, to lead our task force. He knows something we don’t about the perp and is playing it close to the vest. And, I don’t like secrets. My mother is holding back a secret, too. Matt is pushing her to use her powers to help him. When she gives in to his persuasiveness, all hell breaks loose, literally.

Saturday, August 06, 2011

Cocktails Fiction and Gossip - August Issue

The newest issue of Cocktails is now available for viewing. This ezine is very spiffy and always has lots of good stuff to read. I happen to have an ad in this issue, so I'd sure like you all to take a look. I love the way it opens up like a "real" (e.g., paper) magazine. You can view it full screen and flip pages to read. It really is very cool.

Cocktail Fiction and Gossip - August Issue


Lisa Lekle Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

About Lisa Lickel:
Lisa Lickel is a Wisconsin editor and author of inspirational fiction. A member of ACFW and Wisconsin Regional Writers, she also writes radio theater, short stories, and mysteries, and is editor in chief of Creative Wisconsin Magazine. She and her husband enjoy travel and gardening. Find her on the web: LisaLickel.com. She looks forward to her next release, a story co-written with Muse writer Shellie Neumeier, about a family coming home to save the family farm and unraveling secrets, hope, and love as well...coming October 2011. For now, please enjoy her award-winning romance, Meander Scar, available in both print and electronic form at online retailers and for order wherever books are sold. A sneak first chapter is on the web site. Her first Muse mystery is scheduled to release April 2012.
Read Lisa's blog here.

Reminder: Leave a comment on Lisa's blog for a chance to win prizes.

Friday, August 05, 2011

A.M. Roelke Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

* AMBER'S BLOG POST IS NOW AVAILABLE - THIS IS A FUN ONE, FOLKS. BE SURE TO COMMENT TO WIN PRIZES *

Amber is a science fiction writer who has visited my blog to talk about her book, "The Space Station Murders." Since her book is both SF and mystery, she's a welcome author on my blog.

Read A.M. Roelke's blog here.

Reminder: Leave a comment on Amber's blog for a chance to win prizes.

Additional Buy Sites Appearing

I just flew to Germany and Great Britain to drop off a copy of the "Missing, Assumed Dead" book trailer. I was pleased that both Amazon sites are carrying my book. So, if you're a Brit or German, you can buy my books (along with the other MuseItUp) authors at the non-USA sites.

Authors, if you have a book trailer, be sure to upload it to your Amazon Author page. You can also post it as a review on your book's product page. So far, no Amazon has refused my review if it just has the book trailer.

I also found Missing for sale at All Romance Ebooks. They have an excellent price, by the way. While my publisher and I make a bit more if you buy direct from the publisher's bookstore, we don't mind if you save a little money purchasing elsewhere.

A.M. Roelke hasn't updated her blog with the announcement of my book release. Maybe I have the wrong blog link? Anyway, S**t happens, so I hope you'll just visit any of the lovely blogs listed in the right-hand column >>>>> or in an earlier post on this blog.

Remember to leave comments everywhere. There are prizes to be won!

Thursday, August 04, 2011

L. J. Sellers Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

L.J. is an accomplished mystery author whose Detective Jackson series is a very popular ebook and print offering. She'll also be releasing a near-future speculative fiction novel in the more than near future. I'll certainly have her on my blog telling you all about the Jackson series, her standalone thrillers, and her upcoming releases.

Read L.J.'s blog here.

Reminder: Leave a comment on LJ's blog for a chance to win prizes.

Wednesday, August 03, 2011

Lorrie Struiff Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

Lorrie is a mystery, romance, and humor author. Her paranormal novel, "Gypsy Crystal," has held steady in the top ten rated list for Eternal Press on the Fictionwise ebook website. Considering that Eternal has quite a few books out, being in the top ten ain't bad.

Visit all of Lorrie's web page to read about her projects.

Reminder: Leave a comment on Lorrie's blog for a chance to win prizes.

Barabara Ehrentreu's husband had some health issues, so she didn't have a chance to post about my book the other day. Please visit her blog to leave a comment. Every blog in this mini-tour will have winners.

Tuesday, August 02, 2011

First Place for Missing, Assumed Dead Cover

Suzannah Safi's great cover for my mystery, "Missing, Assumed Dead," won first place for the July You Gotta Read Covers contest. Here's my lovely badge (also with a permanent spot in the side bar).

See all the winners at You Gotta Read Covers, including 2nd place to Rochelle Weber's book "Rock Bound (cover by Delilah Stephans), and 3rd place to Gracen Miller's "Fairy Casanova" (cover by Dara England). Be sure to enter your own cover while you're at it.

Barbara Ehrentreu Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

About Barbara's Meanderings
I write about events that happen to me and around the world from a writer's point of view. Nothing in my life ever goes smoothly. Also I write about writing and writers and interview guest authors about once a week. I usually review their books. Occasionally I highlight exceptional blogs. Lately I have been featuring authors from MuseItUp Publishing, my sisters and brothers.
Barbara is a YA author with her first book release in October, "If I Could Be Like Jennifer Taylor." She'll be visiting me here in a couple of months as part of my September MG/YA Blitz Book Tour.

Read Barbara's Blog Here.

Reminder: Leave a comment on Barbara's blog for a chance to win prizes.

Monday, August 01, 2011

Goodbye, Farewell, and Peace Be

My father, known to some of you as Little Eddie from the book of stories about him, died this morning in the hospital. He'd fallen last week and never recovered.


Edward Preston Perkins
November 27, 1921 - August 1, 2011

Charlotte Volnek Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

About C.K.:
C.K. Volnek grew up in Nebraska, enjoying life in small town USA; riding horses in summer and sledding the ginormous hills in winter. She married her best friend and together they have three children and four Papillon fur-kids. She likes to write, hike, watch movies, and dream about the ‘what ifs’ in life, thus spawning the many stories her muse must share.
She is proud to announce her first two novels. Ghost Dog of Roanoke Island will be released in September 2011. A Horse Called Trouble will follow in December 2011. The Secret of the Stones (Book one of The Lost Diaries of Northumberland) will be released April 2012.
Read her blog here.

Reminder: Leave a comment on Charlotte's blog for a chance to win prizes.

Sunday, July 31, 2011

Rosanne Dowell Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

Rosanne is a romance author with many, many books under her belt already, yet she keeps coming up with great stories. Fortunately, she also has time to host me on her blog.

Read Rosanne's Blog Here

Reminder: Leave a comment at Rosanne's blog for a chance to win prizes.

Extra! Lindsay Below's having a SciFi Fest on her blog. Lots of free books and bunches of SF authors. If SF is your thang, be sure to drop in at her blog: http://lbelow.blogspot.com/ My SFR, Ultimate Duty, is featured today.

Saturday, July 30, 2011

Penny Ehrenkranz Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

Penny is an editor for MuseItUp and happens to be the very fine line editor for this book. Since she's not ashamed to host it on her blog, then she must think it's okay.

Penny Lockwood Ehrenkranz has published hundreds of articles and short stories in print magazines and on-line. She writes for both adults and children. Her fiction has appeared in numerous genre and children’s publications and non fiction work has appeared in a variety of writing, parenting, and young adult print magazines and on line publications. She edits for three small independent publishers. Visit her web site at: http://pennylockwoodehrenkranz.yolasite.com/
Read Penny's Blog Here.

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Friday, July 29, 2011

Teen Word Factory Hosts Missing, Assumed Dead

The Teen Word Factor always has lots of great posts for and by teen books an authors. Managed by Rebecca Ryals Russell, be sure to put this blog on your follow list.

Teen Word Factory

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Wednesday, July 27, 2011