Thursday, May 31, 2007

New Stuff with Me

I'll jump in here with an update on developments in my own writing (ahem) career.

Acceptances:
"A Visit to Potter's Field," a light-hearted look at graveyards. Coming in the July issue of Lorelei Signal.

"The Delegate," a tale about future descrimination. The new target of racism: androids. Coming in the October issue of Lorelei Signal.

Now available:
Cadida and the Cave Demon: The further adventures of Cadida and her genie. What trouble will she get into now? You can purchase Cadida and the Djinn on the same page. Come on. Help out a starving writer.

News!
My story, "Final Exam," was voted the favorite from the March issue of The Fifth Di... That means it will appear in Wondrous Web Worlds #8. I have a story in WWW #7, too. I'll post when that anthology becomes available.

Lessee. I've put slideshows of illustrations on my website on both the Tales of a Texas Boy and Cadida's Adventures pages.


Tuesday, May 29, 2007

Need Some Help?

maïa is back with her formula for mentoring would-be screenwriters and playwrights. Her methods are brutal, but she gets results. Here's maïa describing her technique in her own words (slightly edited because I like initial caps on sentences and maia doesn't - sorry maïa).

If you'd like mamma maïa to give you a little tough love, email her at: maia3maia@hotmail.com. Check out her website at: http://saysmom.com. Also, check the last article I posted on her: mysterious maïa


How I work with aspiring writers

For writers of other forms, it’s pretty much the same technique.

It helps to know something of your background in writing, age, education. . .and writing goal. . .such as, do you absolutely have to be a screenwriter (novelist, poet, etc.) or you'll die?. . .or are you just doing it to see if you can? The former has a slim chance of some day in the far future selling (or optioning) a script (novel, poem, song lyric, etc.). The latter has virtually none. . .and that's the first sample of my mentoring style. . .blunt 'n brutal honesty, that I tinge now and then with humor, to soften the blows. . .some see it as sarcasm and can't take the heat. . .they'll never succeed, because at my worst I can't come close to powers that be in la-la-land (or publishing) at their best…working with me will improve your writing skills and thicken your skin to film (or publishing) industry survival levels…

... I'll start at the top and work my way down:

1. You have a full, finished, properly-formatted script/ms (so far, no one who's come to me has)...

I read it and give an overall critique of plot, characters, dialog, etc., point out what works and what doesn't and in critique, and then in more detail within the script/ms itself, tell/show how to fix what needs fixing... same goes for synopsis and pitch (called logline nowadays).

2. You have a full, finished mess that you think is a screenplay/book/story (as have some I've helped)...

First I give you an in-depth analysis of what's wrong with content, plot, characters, dialog, etc.... then, step by step, I show within the work itself, the first few examples of what's wrong with these, show how it should be done and give you a shot at fixing the rest...

I'll urge writers to get books I use myself for good writing basics and format reference... ask me for my ‘tools of the trade’ list, to get the whole range of reference ‘tools’ I recommend…

Then I'll walk you through a rewrite, make suggestions, ask questions about problems in plot, character, dialog, etc., to make you think for yourself, so you won't need me next time... we do this over and over ‘til you get it right and have a marketable script/ms, a great synopsis and an effective pitch...

3. You have only bits of 'brilliant' story 'ideas' & no clue how to develop 'em into full plots/storylines but 'know' they're gonna be the next blockbuster hits (as w/ my 3 young mentees in Las Vegas, Australia & Holland)...

First I burst your bubble with questions about each 'great idea'... how original is it? How many flicks in past 50 years used same gimmick? What's the story behind it going to be? and so on... then I take you through the idea development process step by step, 'til your 'idea' is workable/doable and you have a real storyline to work with.

Then I make you learn how to write a script (story/novel/article/whatever)... I don't do it for you, unless you happen to have $50,000 to $200,000 pocket change handy (seriously, I'll never again work for money, but that's what it costs to have one ghosted).

I'm tough on you all the way, 'cause nobody in the industry is gonna be kind or sympathetic toward you if you send them a piece of scheiss and expect them to read it... (I'm an ecologist and hate the waste of trees for putting garbage on paper!)... I'm kind, but can be lethally sarcastic if my comments, questions, instructions are not sufficiently paid attention to...

It's not necessary for you to have a finished script... it's probably best you don't, since you can't know enough to write it properly and rewriting a mess is twice as much work as learning to do it right, starting from scratch... if you have ideas you'd like to work up now, let's get at it & by the time you're ready for full-out screenwriting, you'll have a fully-fleshed-out story/plot ready for you to learn how to turn it into a script (or whatever).

None of this can be done quickly... nothing really good can be, unless you've got some 'extra-worldly' assistance (I've turned out 3-4 essays a day... each fully polished, needing no editing whatsoever, for a total of almost 200!... now THAT had to be an 'assist' from something beyond the mortal!... don't count on the same yourself!)...

Let me know if you'd like to start on your story idea... I'll be glad to give you references, since most newbies are paranoid about folks 'stealing' their 'great ideas' not willing to believe nobody'd bother... and story ideas are often dreamed up by more than one fertile brain anyway, as all stories break down into 3 basic ones... and those were told around campfires in caves and painted on the walls millennia ago!.. all since is just creative plagiarism...

That's it... Are you up for it?... love and hugs, mammamaïa


Monday, May 28, 2007

Memorial Day


I could not think of any more fitting words than those of Abraham Lincoln delivered at Gettysburg on November 19, 1863 memorializing the fallen soldiers.

Four score and seven years ago our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in Liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal.

Now we are engaged in a great civil war, testing whether that nation, or any nation, so conceived and so dedicated, can long endure. We are met on a great battle-field of that war. We have come to dedicate a portion of that field, as a final resting place for those who here gave their lives that that nation might live. It is altogether fitting and proper that we should do this.

But, in a larger sense, we can not dedicate—we can not consecrate—we can not hallow—this ground. The brave men, living and dead, who struggled here, have consecrated it, far above our poor power to add or detract. The world will little note, nor long remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here. It is for us the living, rather, to be dedicated here to the unfinished work which they who fought here have thus far so nobly advanced. It is rather for us to be here dedicated to the great task remaining before us — that from these honored dead we take increased devotion to that cause for which they gave the last full measure of devotion — that we here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain — that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom — and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.

Wednesday, May 23, 2007

IM - Do You Really Want to Hit Send?

Rick Reed writes horror. Rick writes gay horror. That thought intrigued me, so I asked Rick if I could get a bit of clarification on this sub-genre.
A few words about Rick, first. Rick has written a basketful of books, all of them available from Amazon. Simply search for Rick R. Reed and you’ll come up with several novels that deal with the seamier, more demented side of the psyche.

He recently moved from Chicago to Florida, so he's probably in a somewhat culture-shocked state right now. His latest book, IM, is just being released this month from Quest Books.

IM, stands for Instant Message or is that Instant Murder? A serial killer stalks men through gay instant message sites. This is a chilling tale of the dangers of high tech friendships.

In the Blood is scheduled for release in November and Deadly Vision: Book One of the Cassandra Chronicles is scheduled for release in January, 2008, both from IM book trailer on YouTube.

Marva: Welcome, Rick. Thanks so much for stopping in.

Rick: You’re welcome. I couldn’t resist, especially when you have cookies set out. And martinis.

Marva: First up, tell us a bit about your latest book, IM.

Rick: IM is a light-hearted romantic romp about the trouble one can get into when one goes searching for love online. Readers might be dismayed to find those troubles can include murder and dismemberment. But seriously, IM has been called a "deliciously nasty psychological thriller" by one reviewer and I think that’s a pretty good descriptor. It’s about a serial killer who may or may not be dead himself luring his victims through Internet hook-up sites. It has a lot of twists and turns and I think keeps readers guessing right up to the end.

Marva: A cautionary tale? It makes me think twice about instant messaging. The theme of people walking into dangerous situations unthinkingly is a horror icon. Was that part of your thinking? To warn about consequences of risky behavior? After all, every teenager in horror movies just has to explore that creepy house by the lake.

Rick: Another reviewer called it a ‘cautionary tale’ and I can understand why, since one doesn’t have to look too far to see a warning about the perils of inviting strangers you’ve met online into your home. I don’t really set out, though, to write tales that are ‘cautionary;’ I just set out to write good stories that keep readers turning the pages. If anything is ‘cautionary,’ it’s because horror and suspense come from dangerous situations. So, using that logic, any book about a dangerous situation might be labeled cautionary.

Marva: You wrote a blog on questions asked by a friend about the label 'gay horror writer'. Tell us about that.

Rick: First, he asked me if it bothered me being labeled a gay horror writer. He wondered if I resented the label and if I just would prefer to be called writer and let my writing be looked at simply for its own unique characteristics rather than under some arbitrary labels, especially ones that had the potential for being loaded, like "horror" and "gay." I told him that booksellers and publishers were very fond of labels and of fitting writers into niches. More than fond, it was almost a necessity. I said that I didn't really mind because labels help readers find me. If people out there are looking to read some good gay horror, I'm happy to be found on that particular shelf. I'm happy to be found anywhere, because I have been known to be invisible, but that's another blog, or a topic for discussion with a good psychotherapist.

Marva: Do you feel as if you're a spokesman for gay horror writers?

Rick: The guy who asked me about gay horror was of a mind that I was the only writer operating under such a mantle. I told him first that I was not the only gay horror writer. There are many other very talented writers out there who might also be labeled the same way: Doug Clegg, Christian Muncy, Michael Rowe, Clive Barker, to name just a few. But if I were given a tiara and a sash that read "Gay Horror Queen" I would wear it with an enormous amount of pride and would endeavor to fulfill all the duties (including being a spokesperson and letting the world know how gay horror can contribute to world peace). In the end, though, I’m just a writer who wants to tell goosebump-raising stories; I leave the spokesperson stuff for the ad people and politicos.

Marva: Some of your previous books don't have a 'gay' theme (whatever that is). IM, your latest book, is very upfront about that. How does it advocate 'gay' anymore than, say, King's Misery advocates overzealous book fans?

Rick: These questions coming right now seemed fitting. As you said, IM is probably one of the gayest of gay horror books I've written, even though one reviewer (bless him) said that it could be enjoyed by any fan of mysteries or crime fiction. I don't mind being a gay horror writer, but it's always nice to cross over. But IM really deals with the gay community, particularly the community that is exploding onto sites like Manhunt, Men4Men, AdamforAdam, Gay.com and so on. I do think IM will resonate with gay men especially because of how it ties anonymous sex to the potential for anonymous murder. I think any "community" has its own unique horrors...and with IM, I just explored one I knew.

Marva: A friend of mine mentioned he didn't read horror because it didn't scare him. What does IM offer somebody like my friend? How would you entice him to read it?

Rick: Your friend and I would get along, because I’ve said the same thing about both horror movies and books. I’ve become too jaded to scare easily. But I would tell him to not close the door completely because when something does succeed and does scare me, then it’s priceless. One movie that did that was an Asian horror film called AUDITION. It still disturbs me to think about it. I’d like to think that IM would have the kind of dread-filled moments in it that might frighten your friend. Even though we’ve had all this talk about it being gay, I think the fear in IM is pretty universal. Gay, straight, or whatever, I think we’ve all taken risks when it comes to making a human connection for love or sex, and therein lies the fear. All it would take is one mentally unbalanced person, thinking, "it could never happen to me" and allowing yourself to be alone with this person. I think what makes IM scary—and what makes a lot of my work scary—is that in my definition of horror, it could really happen. When a stranger you met online comes over, looks harmless, and then pulls out a hunting knife, I think that’s pretty damn terrifying.

Marva: I like to end with an invitation for a writer to say/plug anything they want. 500 words or less. Go.

Rick: I love nothing better than plugging myself. Thank you. I’d just like to encourage anyone out there reading this to stop by and visit my website at http://www.rickrreed.com/ or my MySpace page, www.myspace.com/rickrreed. A quick visit to either place will give you a pretty good snapshot of who I am and what I’m all about. I would also encourage all of you to pick up a copy of IM…it’s sure to make you deliciously unsettled.

Thanks, Marva

Marva: You're entirely welcome. Grab another cookie on the way out.

Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Resonance - Chris Dolley

Chris is a friend of mine on MySpace. He decide to throw a virtual book tour for the release of his new book, "Resonance." Check out this site for more detail.

For the tour, I asked Chris a couple of questions (posted here with his answers). To see more of the questions and The Worldwide Virtual Book Tour go to Chris's MySpace site.

My questions for Chris:
Marva: How did you get the idea of the virtual book tour and the set up for doing it?

Chris: I got it from Mindy Klasky who organised a virtual book tour last year. The idea's been around for few years and each author tweaks it some. I think there's even a company that organises them and charges a fee to place your book with 'popular' blogs. Which, to me, sounds like a recipe for disaster for the 'popular' blogs as once the word gets out that they're selling space to promote books no one'll believe a word they print.


But maybe that's just me. I also think it's more fun to organise the event yourself as it gives you more scope to be inventive and interact with friends and readers. Like my remote signing experiment. How many other authors have attempted to sign books by astral projection? And lived.

Which is why I contacted Microsoft and got a hold of a beta copy of Window ESP. It's the perfect platform - that and having two mediums strapped to a quantum computer - when you need to access the astral plane.

But, seriously, the biggest enemy of a new or mid-list author is anonymity. And virtual tours help us authors who live in the middle of nowhere get out and meet people without having our luggage go astray.

Marva: Why do you live in France? Just lucky?

Chris: Very lucky. We moved to France twelve years ago to take advantage of the property price differential - homes in France were a third of the price in England - and the better climate. We try to grow all our own food so having cheap land, deep soil and a long growing season is a huge bonus. And the pace of life is different in France. It's changing but when we first arrived
it was like stepping back into rural England as it used to be in the 50s - lots of small family farms and an emphasis on lifestyle rather than profit.

About Resonance

You can't create a world in seven days without cutting corners Graham Smith is a 33 year-old office messenger. To the outside world he's an obsessive-compulsive mute, weird but harmless. But to
Graham Smith, it's the world that's weird. And far from harmless. He sees things others can't . . . or won't. He knows that roads can change course, people disappear, office blocks migrate across town. All at night when no one's looking. The world's an unstable place, still growing, sloughing off layers of reality like dead skin. One day you drive by, and it's changed.

Annalise Mercado hears voices, all from girls calling themselves Annalise. Sometimes she thinks they're spirit guides, sometimes she thinks she's crazy. But then they tell her about Graham Smith, the men who want him dead, and how only she can save him. So begins the story of two people whose lives appear fragmented across alternate realities and how, together, they hold the key to the future of a billion planets. . .

Friday, May 18, 2007

Picture This

You can't tell a book by its cover, right? Maybe not, but a striking cover draws the potential reader's eye. Maybe they'll pick it up and read the back, flip a few pages, look at the cover again, then take it to the cash register (or click it into that ubiquitous Shopping Cart at on-line stores).

It's nice to sell a story. Having it illustrated is icing on the cake. I've asked the artists who illustrated by stories how they went about capturing the story, sometimes in a single illustration.

Holly Eddy is a regular illustrator for a number of magazines. She created the wonderful picture of Sasquatch that accompanied by story "Chilpequin 22 Miles" in Lorelei Signal. This particular illustration came in 4th Place in the Preditors & Editors Poll for best story art. Made me proud, she did.

Teri Santitoro is an artist, writer, and editor. 7ARS was born in another century under the name theresa alice rapposelli, and added santitoro when she married a human. She currently lives in NE PA with her husband, son, dog, bird and fish. She is the editor of Sam's Dot Publishing magazine, Scifaikuest. Again, I'm familiar with her work because she's illustrated both of my Cadida chapbooks produced through Sam's Dot Publishing. Her cover illustrations capture my thoughts on Cadida perfectly. See Teri's website for more illustrations.


Marva: Hello, ladies. Thanks for answering my questions and allowing me to post some of your illustrations on my blog.

First question: How did you get involved illustrating stories?

Holly: I have always loved art, and creating something from nothing, so naturally I pursued that path. I received my BFA in commercial art: Illustration last may and have been working freelance steadily since then.

Teri: Actually, I began when I was still in school. I made up my own comics and also tried doing illustrations for stories or books that inspired me. Mr. James B. Baker and Mr. J Erwine published my first paid illustration in one of ProMart's ezines.

Marva: What do you look for in a story as the main concept to illustrate? Is there are process or is it seat-of-the-pants?

Holly: Well, I try to look for parts of the story that I think would be most aesthetically pleasing. But there is always a process, I never start out with just one idea. I go through a lot of sketches and ideas before I can narrow it down to one concept and then I have to find references for what I am drawing. For example, on your story I had all sorts of reference photos of bigfoot, and apes, bars, bartenders, glasses...anything I thought would be of help to create a believable setting.

Teri: What I look for are stories that have a lot of what I refer to as "events". Not necessarily a lot of "action", but rather scenes that grab the reader and imprint themselves on the memory. Those are the ones that are the most fun to illustrate. Some of my work seems to develop almost on its own, while other projects must be thoughtfully considered before and during the creative process.


Marva: Black and white OR color? If you had your druthers, which would you prefer to use in illustrations?

Holly: I usually have a choice, but I prefer color.

Teri: I prefer color. I love color--it's like a treat for the eyes.

Marva: Would you recommend to budding artists to pursue story illustration? If so, what one piece of advice would you give them?

Holly: I would recommend It, but it is an extremely competitive market. As for advice, be on the top of your game, Don't take anything too personally, and never stop advertising yourself.

Teri: Definitely. My advice would be: Develop your own style, and then illustrate the kind of stories that inspire you the most.

Marva: Again, thanks a bunch to both of you. I'm proud to have had my stories illustrated by both of you.

Holly: Thank you. I wish you the best and I really enjoyed illustrating your story.

Teri: You're welcome.

Tuesday, May 15, 2007

Tyree Campbell - Con Man

A retired U.S. Army translator, Tyree taught at a business college for three years, did post-graduate work in Chinese studies, and all the while wrote and wrote and wrote and finally turned rejection slips into acceptances. Since 1 January 2000, when his first story was published, he's had some eighty short stories and two novels published, and about two dozen poems, including a third-place Rhysling. He writes primarily soft science fiction, some dark fantasy, and the occasional spooky horror. He's also the Managing Editor of Sam's Dot Publishing and invites you to take a look at what SDP has to offer.

Also, checkout Tyree's MySpace site.

If you're in the neighborhood, you can meet Tyree in the Dealers areas at these upcoming Cons:

May 18-20 DemiCon, Des Moines, Iowa
May 25-27 ConQuest Kansas City, Missouri
August 3-5 DiversiCon,Minneapolis, MN

Marva: Hello, Tyree. Welcome to Dasef Central. There are so many places to start with you, but I've decided to start with your role as Managing Editor of Sam's Dot Publishing. At the top are Conventions, since that makes my heading work. I know you go to many cons as a dealer. An unnamed source said "it was a bit like watching a used car salesman at work." Would you care comment on that?

Tyree: LOL. Yeh, it is a bit like selling used cars (and I know which unnamed source named J to thank for that comment). But…well, see, most conventions have several tables that sell books. New books, used books, small publishers, and so forth. Those who sell new books, by frex Robert Sawyer or Mercedes Lackey, don’t have to do anything. Those sellers can sit there in total confidence that customers will flock to them. Same with sellers of used books. Everyone is always looking for that one Vance or Wilhelm or Farmer that they missed. But small indie publishers cannot just sit there like rutabagas and expect people to come to them (yet I see so many small indies doing just that at conventions).

My approach is proactive. First, I’m almost always standing. People notice someone who is standing. That leads to eye contact. As soon as I have eye contact, I say something. Hello, or Reading material, or something to engage the potential customer. Don’t forget, my job is to relieve this person of some hard-earned money for publications they’ve hardly heard of. So…I also hand them a flier that tells about us…hand them, as opposed to expecting them to take a flier. This way, the physical act of handing it to them usually compels them to take the flier. I’ve established contact. Then I try to find out what they like to read. Sometimes they are specific: science fiction, or fantasy, or whatever. No matter what they respond, I almost always have something that fits their desires. And I go on from there.

If they say they like just about anything, I clasp my hands together, raise my eyes to the sky, and say, “They’re gonna buy one of each! Thank you, God!” This usually gets a laugh, eases the connection, and I can talk with them.

If they say they don’t know what they like, I have some off-beat publications I can introduce them to, like the Drabblers, or David Kopaska-Merkel’s tales of nursery rhyme crimes solved by an adult detective (Why did the dish abduct the spoon, and was there ransom involved? Who mutilated the three blind mice, and why?).

Like I said, proactive. And it seems to work.

Marva: The splash screen of SDP says: "Dedicated to the late James B. Baker…our editor, our mentor, but most of all our friend. We’ll love you forever, Jim." Tell us about ProMart and your relationship with Mr. Baker.

Tyree: Jim was the first to accept and publish one of my stories ("Thanksgiving Dinner," 1 January 2000, The Martian Wave. What a great way to start the millennium). Time went on and I had several other stories and poems published [and won most of the voting contests]. Jim wanted to go into print publications, and needed someone to develop a print magazine. I offered to develop one called "Aoife’s Kiss." So it got developed. Problem was, Jim had an ego, and I was stubborn. No, wait. I had an ego, and Jim was stubborn. No . .. well, you get the idea. So we butted heads on occasion. But toward the end, I called him, we talked…he really really was a wonderful person…and he was concerned about the fate of his publishing after he had moved on to the next phase. I told him I would take care of it. And WE all have done this…

Marva: Sam's Dot Publishing has a lot going on: several 'zines and lots of individual books and chapbooks. Where do you hope to go with Sam's Dot Publishing in the future?

Tyree: Oh, more of the same, really, but always improving. Our mission statement says we publish new and beginning writers. We will always do that. It’s what Jim wanted. That’s our roots. At the same time, I do hope to attract some "names." And we’re doing this. Five-time Hugo nominee Robert Reed [wrote the novel "Marrow," among others] will be in the June 2007 Aoife’s Kiss. Robert Sawyer has indicated he will send an original story when I ask for it. Mike McCarty, a Stoker nominee, has been published twice in HUNGUR Magazine (including the current issue). Jason Sizemore, who runs Apex Digest, was in the March 2007 Aoife’s Kiss. Mary Turzillo, who has graced many a page of Asimov’s, has a novella and a short story with us. Bud Webster, maybe Barry Malzberg…we’re getting some names in.

That helps our street cred.

But most of all, it’s important to keep in mind that in between the Charles Sheffields and the writers who haven’t quite reached their skill level there are hundreds…thousands…of writers and stories out there that may not be worthy of a professional rate but are nevertheless fine fine stories and poems, and are worthwhile to read. We live in a culture that emphasizes winning…and yes, the really top writers deserve all they can get. All I’m saying is that the next few tiers of writers have much to say that is worthy. And that’s where we publish.

Future publications? Well, this August we’re coming out with a biannual magazine called Sounds Of The Night…it’s a crossover magazine, sf/f/h, but primarily sensual science fiction. No, not erotica, certainly not porn…but we do want stories and poems that excite the senses.

And Cover Of Darkness, which we just released, has done so well already that we probably will do it again next year.

Marva: SDP has poetry magazines (Illumen, Scifaikuest) and poetry included in the other magazines, too. Why all this poetry in the midst of fantasy, horror, and science fiction?

Tyree: I like poetry.

Okay, that’s a facile response. Speculative poetry is…the exquisite expression of an idea. Science fiction (yes, and fantasy and horror) is a realm in which people deal with ideas. It’s interconnected. I think a writer has to have something of a poet, even if that something is just a vague understanding, in order to write lucidly and succinctly. Look at Terrie Relf’s poetry, just for an example. Her poems are waaaay out there. But she takes an unusual approach in her prose, her stories, and I think her poetry—more specifically her poetic vision—helps her to do that. Let’s face it, most storylines have been written and rewritten time and time again. I think it was Heinlein who said there was really only one story. Well, poetry—the poetic vision—helps you to see that "one" story from several different vantage points and battlefields.

Besides…I like poetry.

Marva: Your writing reminds me of Robert Heinlein and John Varley. Good guess? Or, just who would you like to be compared to?

Tyree: Oh, my, yes, I loved Varley’s character Cirocco Jones. She is the subconscious template for most of my female protagonists. Philosophically I’m pretty much a libertarian, which relates well to Heinlein, and I like Heinlein’s simplicity of style to express complex issues. But my favorite writer is Jack Vance. He creates worlds, and fills these worlds with all sorts of characters—heroes and villains and everything in between. I don’t know that I consciously emulate any of them…but certainly I have learned from them.

Compared to? Oh, hahaha. Instead of the second John Varley, I’d rather be the first Tyree Campbell. But I’ve quite a long ways to go, yet….

Marva: Your latest book, The Dog at the Foot of the Bed, was just re-released and Nyx, your first book is still available.. Give us a rundown on what's these books are about.
(Read the Ed Cox Review of The Dog at the Foot of the Bed)

Tyree: Hmm…the lineage of the two books intertwines, actually. "Dog" under another title was really the first novel I started. It underwent three complete rewrites. In I think the second revision, there was a character who underwent great hardships and rough terrain just to get a message to the protagonist. Then she disappears from the novel—she was just a very minor character, and what she did was not really needed in the story, so I excised her [that is so difficult to do, too, to terminate an unnecessary character]. Well…she was so interesting that I decided to write a novel about her. Thus Nyx. The style I used comes from…okay, back in the 60s and 70s there was a series of maybe 25 paperback books—assassin espionage things—by Donald Hamilton (who also wrote some kickin’ SF). These were the Matt Helm books. Yeh, Dean Martin played Matt Helm in some very insipid movies (The Wrecking Crew, The Silencers, etc.) that had—trust me on this—absolutely nothing to do with the books or even with Hamilton’s protagonist. Hamilton has a direct, cold-blooded style that I found useful to convey my character. Nyx is an assassin, some 500 years from now. She is utterly cold-blooded—think La Femme Nikita. And she is logical in her approach to self-defense.

Frex, at one point, Nyx is holding a weapon on a baddie. The baddie suggests that someone is sneaking up behind Nyx. Nyx reasons that she has only one possible response. See…if she turns around, the first baddie will get her. If she does not turn around, the second baddie will get her. So…she shoots the first baddie, then turns around to deal with the second one, knowing that she is now safe from the first baddie. This, of course, is hard on the baddies…which is just tough bananas.

Well…in this story, Nyx finds that in order to accomplish her mission, she must reacquire her long-lost femininity.

Oh, btw…at several conventions I’ve been approached and asked when the sequel to Nyx was coming out. I hadn’t planned on writing sequels to it…but yes, I’ve already started one, and might well have several before I’m done. Look for "Mystere" late this year or early next.

As for "Dog," it’s a science fiction who-dunnit. Some sixteen years before the main story takes place, the Shannen family was attacked and their farmhold destroyed. The children, including twins Ovin and Siobhan, escaped to a remote planet. Seeking revenge, Ovin became an assassin, and Siobhan became in effect a police officer. One of Siobhan’s assignments is to bring Ovin to justice. The other siblings: Kevan, Una, Deyrdra, want the family to be reunited, of course. So there is additional pressure and conflict for the twins to deal with.

Well…some catastrophic events (including the fact that now, sixteen years later, someone is trying to kill the Shannen children again!) occur that require Ovin and Siobhan to work together to resolve them. But I plotted it so that if they succeed in resolving those events, Ovin and Siobhan might forever be separated.

In essence, The Dog At The Foot Of The Bed is about a family torn apart by outside forces and by their responses to these forces. It’s difficult to write at length about Dog because I don’t want to spoil any of the surprises—and there are quite a few unexpected developments and twists and turns. But Dog is also a romance—a love story, and sometimes the sexuality will take some unconventional twists. Nobody ever actually says "I love you" in Dog…and when you read it from beginning to end, you will find that fact totally astonishing.

Marva: Tyree, what would you like my blogreaders to know about SDP that we haven't mentioned already?

Tyree: I think Robert Sawyer said it best, in his novel "Mindscan"—that quite often the difference between an award-winning novel and a little known but competently written novel is "the breaks." In other words, only a few pieces of writing receive awards. But there is a great body of sf/f/h literature out there that is just as readable and merits attention. I’d like to think that Sam’s Dot Publishing presents this "readable" literature in our various publications. So sure, go ahead and read Sawyer and Farmer and Heinlein. But keep in mind that we have some fine stories and poems and illustrations that will thrill you, too. We’re worth it.

Marva: Thanks, Tyree.

In the interests of full disclosure, Sam's Dot Publishing is my publisher for the Cadida series and I've also had a couple of stories published in The Fifth Di..., another SDP magazine.

Friday, May 11, 2007

One for the Road


A Conversation with Wilga...

Today, we'll be talking with Wilga Hill Boomerang of Cocktail Reviews. Wilga, or some reasonable facsimile of her, started Cocktail Reviews to provide honest reviews for writers not quite as in demand as Dan Brown. The premise is that there are lots of great books out there languishing in the desert of small presses, unappreciated by the New York Times Review of Books. Cocktail Reviews hopes to fill that gap.

Marva: Hello, Ms. Boomerang, or may I call you Wilga? Okay, I'll take that as a yes. How did Cocktail Reviews get started?

Wilga: As an avid e-book reader, I browsed review sites to get an idea of what e-books were like before I purchased them. Some reviews didn’t tell me an awful lot—nothing more than the original book blurb, anyway—and I thought about starting my own review site with the idea of providing that little bit extra. We do try to do our reviews differently, but sometimes a ‘normal’ review is posted so that all types of reviews are represented.

Marva: What's with the drink names for the reviewers?

Wilga: I discussed opening a review site with a close friend of mine (Witch of Salem) and came up with the name Cocktail Reviews. I think it was Witch who suggested the reviewer names being cocktails. It’s different to the norm, so I liked the idea.

Marva: Give us a rundown of how authors can request reviews and how the review process works.

Wilga: Review requests should be sent via email to cocktailreviews@yahoo.com with the author name, publisher, and book title in the subject line. A blurb should be sent in the body of the email along with either the word count or amount of pages (this determines whether the book will get picked up quickly and reviewed fast if it’s a short), the publisher and author name, and the ISBN number.

The blurbs are put in an MS document and sent out to the reviewers in batches. If a blurb catches their attention the reviewers ask me to ask for the pdf/ARC. I send the pdf/ARC to the reviewer. Once reviewed, the reviewer sends me their review and I post it online, providing it isn’t a bad review. Bad reviews get sent to the author/publisher if they choose to see it via email.

Marva: Are these considered to be "professional" reviews?

Wilga: Authors and publishers are free to use our reviews in quotes or any promotion. If what we say helps the author/publisher to garner the public’s interest, then that’s a bonus. I wanted to help authors get recognition, to help them on their writing journey.

Marva: I know you don't want to be thought of as simply a shill for writers. What happens if you hate a book?

Wilga: If one of us hates it, I put the blurb back in the blurb bank to see if someone else may like to try it. After all, not everyone will like every book. If more than one person hates it, I send the author/publisher the option of receiving the bad review/s via email. No one has declined to see their bad reviews yet. One author, utterly charming I might add, wanted to see the bad review so that she could see where she could improve herself in the future. I admired her for that. She wasn’t just after praise; she wanted to learn from her mistakes.

Marva: I see the CR reviewers state their literary preferences. Lots of horror, chicklit, paranormal, romance, historical, etc. Not a single science fiction reviewer. Will Cocktail Reviews consider reviewing science fiction?

Wilga: Of course. Every blurb is sent out. It may get picked up by one of us if we fancy a change. Anything is welcome at Cocktails. Authors/publishers just have to sit tight and hope one of us pick up on the blurb.

Marva: What else do you want to tell us about Cocktail Reviews? Go for it.

Wilga: Just that I apologise if longer books take time to read. Some of us work full time so have to read the books in our spare time. Of course, we’d love to be able to sit down and read these wonderful stories in one sitting (some of us can, and some of us can read short stories in our lunch breaks or while we’re meant to be working—naughty, but fun!). I worry that the author/publisher may think we’ve forgotten about them, but we haven’t.

I’d mainly like to thank the authors/publishers for sending their books to Cocktail Reviews. After all, they have no idea what the review will be like and trust us with their hard work.

Marva: Thanks, Wilga!

Friday, May 04, 2007

Super-powered Heroic Fiction

An Interview with Robin Reed on Superhero Fiction

I found Robin Reed on a forum on general writing topics for writers. When I saw Robin's release of the second in her series "Power vs Power," I decided to ask a few questions. This is a relative small niche market, but the writers and followers of the genre are enthusiastic.

The question comes to mind: Where do superheroes come from? I don't mean in the Superman sense of arriving from the planet Krypton, but how superheroes are formed in the minds of the writers. Marvel and DC comics aren't the only venues for superheroes. The Metahuman Press on-line zine is a place you can find brand-new superheroes to admire. If the topic rings your bell, check out Robin's work on MHP and go to their forum to bat ideas with the folks creating the new superheroes as we speak.

By Robin Reed
Power vs Power series:
Reflection
Hero Without a Name
Xanthan Gum: Print and ebook available through Booklocker
Earth - the fobidden planet! Where strange beings called humans toil endlessly, creating the stories loved throughout Galactic Civilization. Stories collectively called The Movies.

One brave soul dares to go there. He has a dream. He wants to be a Movie Star like his hero, E.T.

Xanthan Gumm is his name, and he has risked everything to be in The Movies and to meet the King of Earth - Steven Spielberg!

Robin also draws a mean cartoon. Check out Barstow Productions

Marva: So, since superheroes are iconic...

Robin: I have to stop you right there. Who says superheroes are iconic? I read a lot of comics in my life before I ever heard that superheroes are iconic, and I regard it as the kind of idea that is used when people write Ph.D theses on popular culture but don’t actually read the original material. I will grant that the most well known DC superheroes, especially Superman, have become a bit iconic because you can say “Superman” anywhere in the world and people will assume you’re talking about the superhero rather than anything by Nietzsche or George Bernard Shaw.

I have never liked characters that are the least bit iconic. Icons are boring. They never change. Superman in particular is hard to write because he can do so much. When I was a kid DC had a lot of Superman titles but they all were about Lois Lane or Jimmy Olsen and how their lives interacted with Superman. The man of steel himself is too perfect to be interesting.

The only interesting stories about Superman that I have seen are really about Clark Kent. He arrived as a baby on Earth and was lucky to be taken in by a couple that taught him how to be human and what is right and wrong. They taught him to like humans, to believe that their lives have value even though they are so much weaker than he is. Imagine the same baby being picked up by people who tried to abuse him, or even being in an orphanage or a series of foster homes. If he learned to hate people, if he became selfish and never had any discipline, he would grow into a monster and use his powers to make himself Emperor of Earth. Actually, you don’t have to imagine this, just see General Zod in the Christopher Reeve Superman movies.

I was never a DC reader anyway. I was a Marvel reader. In Marvel comics each character - hero, villain, or otherwise - is an individual, a person. If someone gains amazing powers, whether they use them for good or evil depends on their character, the person they are before they gain the powers. Peter Parker starts out using his powers just to make money, he becomes a celebrity. Only when his uncle is killed by a criminal that Peter didn’t bother to stop, does Spider-Man start doing good.

In the Marvel universe, characters sometimes change sides too, bad guys become good and vice versa. Things happen in their lives that change them. Icons never do that.

Marva: How do you create that feeling of superhero-ness when nobody has heard of your SH before?

Robin: I’m not sure how to answer this. All fictional characters start in the brain of a single person. Nobody ever heard of Sherlock Holmes before the first story was published. If a writer creates a character that many people like, soon that character will be famous.

Marva: Do you follow specific rules in SH creation? That is, is there a formula for backstory, as shown in Spiderman (created by external forces superhero) or Superman (SH by birth) or Batman (SH by use of wealth?). Are there other creation formulas?

Robin: There are no rules. Or formulas. Writers just come up with ideas that they like. Sometimes they go on to glory, often they flop.

Of your three origin stories, “external forces” is really a huge variety of origins. The origin is just a way to get your character started, though. It could be anything. What matters is the character of the human being and how he or she uses his or her new abilities. Even being born with powers doesn’t guarantee whether someone will be a hero or a villain, it’s the person.

Marva: Who's your superhero? What are his super powers? How does he or she fit into the mythos of comic book superheroes as outlined above?

Robin: I have created two for the series at MetaHumanPress.com. One is a riff on Batman, I will admit. I always thought that a billionaire could do a lot of good in the world without donning a costume and personally beating up bad guys. He can prevent crime by giving inner city kids some hope and getthing them good educations. Batman, as Bruce Wayne, is shown supporting charities in the comics, but just the cost of one Batmobile could help a lot of people.

My other one is a young man who has Superman like powers given to him by a strange amulet he finds. He is attracted to superheroing by the glory, the applause of other people, rather than by a real devotion to doing good. He means to do good, he is not a bad person, but he can’t handle the responsibilty to use the power properly. He will become famous, a shining example of heroics to the world, but will let himself come under the control of dark forces. He will do bad things even while the world still thinks of him as a hero, even iconic.

Marva: How does your methodology differ from that fan fiction?

Robin: I don’t know how much comics-based fanfic there is. I mostly hear about fanfic related to TV shows and movies. I might be surprised if I searched for it on the internet.

Marva: Thanks for answering my questions, Robin.

Tuesday, May 01, 2007

Just Out! Cadida and the Cave Demon

Hello, blogreaders! Today, I'm talking with Cadida and Bascoda from the chapbook "Cadida and the Djinn" (Sam's Dot Publishing) and the upcoming "Cadida and the Cave Demon."


Marva: Hi Cadida. Nice of you and Bascoda to drop in.

Cadida: Ciao.

Marva: Ciao? I thought you were from somewhere in the Middle East and most likely from some ancient time.

Cadida: Puhleeze. That's my character Cadida, not the real me.

Marva: Well, who are you, really?

Cadida: I'm an Italian actress playing the role of a girl who has a personal genie named Bascoda.

Marva: Speaking of whom...It's nice of you to come by today, Bascoda.

Bascoda: Happy to be here. I'd like to mention that I'll be in a major motion picture coming soon to theaters everywhere. I play Sergio Mobile, the brother of the new crime boss, "The Godmother."

Marva: Ah. I hadn't heard that.

Bascoda: This is the first announcement, right here on your blog.

Marva: Wow, thanks for the scoop, Bascoda. Say, you do look like a member of the Cosa Nostra now that you mention it.

Bascoda: Being a genie...

Marva: You're not an actor like Cadida?

Bascoda: Nope. I'm a certified genie, registered with Central Spell Casting.

Marva: Cadida? Are you kidding about being an actress?

Cadida: Of course not. I'm an accomplished method actor.

Marva: So, you're in the movie with Bascoda?

Cadida: Absolutement, mon cherie. I play a ruthless woman, Donna Mobile, who takes over the Coreleone syndicate. Frankie Coppola chose me for the role without an audition.

Marva: That's good to know, but maybe we should just stick to the characters you play in the Cadida tales.

Cadida: Of course. What would you like to know?

Marva: Yes, uh, how did you prepare for that role?

Cadida: I studied quite a bit of middle eastern mythology, then ignored any of the boring parts. Facts aren't big for me either.

Bascoda: I just followed the script. Some people like to wing it. I just like to do a good job with what I'm given.


Marva: Speaking of what you're given, despite your resemblance to Marlon Brando, your one and only picture in Cadida and the Djinn shows you with fangs and a snout. How long did it take you to get through make-up?

Bascoda: Now, listen, I told you I'm a certified genie. I didn't need makeup, just like I don't need makeup now to look like Marlon.

Marva: That's a very useful tool for an actor. How about you, Cadida? Any special effects needed for your role?

Cadida: No, I pretty much play it just as I am. After all, I'm a very attractive person and I don't need any enhancements.

Marva: No, I'd say that 7ARS drew you very well. Your cover shot is great!

Cadida: Thank you.

Marva: That's about all the space I have for today, so one last question. What's next for you two, other than the movie?

Bascoda: "Cadida and the Cave Demon" is scheduled for release soon.

Marva: Through Sam's Dot Publishing again?

Cadida: Of course, and available through the Genre Mall.

Marva: Can you give us a quick rundown of the plot?

Cadida: Certainly. Weeks after Cadida, escaped from the clutches of a band of raiders, she decides she'd better return to the cave, where she had been held prisoner, to see if the raiders had captured some other poor soul. She summons her Djinn, Bascoda, to guide her back to the cave. Cadida, Bascoda, and Sheik, her dog, return to the cave where she was held captive. They find someone in the cave, but not a prisoner as they expected. Cadida, Bascoda, and Sheik take on the raiders again to help a very lonely demon find a new home.

Marva: I'd just like to thank Cadida and Bascoda for dropping by.

Cadida: Thanks for having us.

Bascoda: It was my pleasure.

April Articles Redux

Here's a link list of articles from April.

Bruce Boston - Bram Stoker Award Winner

Linda Kuhlmann - Family History Turns to Mystery

Review by Bryan Catherman - Letters from the Front Lines

MonkeyJohn - Kids' Books - Monkey Play!

How to Write a Book Review by Bryan Catherman

David de Beer - Flash Man!

Mysterious maïa

JoJo Jensen - Willamette Writers

Tuesday, April 24, 2007

JoJo Jensen - Willamette Writers


JoJo is the leader of the Eugene (Oregon) chapter of the Willamette Writers Group. I thought it would be nice to hear from her since the details on the WWG Conference 2007 is just appearing on the WWG website.

Check it out! Especially that huge list of agents and editors who will be available for pitches. You'll have to sign up early to get the one(s) you want. There is a fee, I'm afraid. But not much in life is free.

Marva: Hi, JoJo. Thanks for answering a few questions. I know that you're the Grand Poobah of the Eugene chapter of the Willamette Writers Group. This is in Oregon for the geographically-challenged. We'll get to that in a bit, but first tell us a little about yourself.

JoJo: Thanks for having me—I love talking about writing!!

I started writing more than ten years ago when I woke up one morning with a book idea in my head that wouldn’t go away. I had written marketing, sales and pr materials in my business life, but had never even considered writing as something I could do.

Five years later, my book Dirt Farmer Wisdom hit the bookstores. My book is about family wisdom and language passed down from generation to generation that was used to teach, motivate and inspire my family to reach for our dreams. Phrases like “You can’t catch water with a fist,” and “Kill the closest snake” are just some of the gems you’ll find in the book. Published by Red Wheel / Weiser in 2002, it is still in print and available!

A big surprise came when I discovered that a quote from my book made it to the pages of Reader’s Digest’s in the section, “Quotable Quotes.” Huge thrill—big honor.

I don’t have a web site yet—I’m working on it. Jojojensen.com will be the address, so I hope your gracious readers will check back with me in the future!

With regard to Willamette Writers, I am the new Coordinator of the Eugene Chapter and have an awesome team of people who have stepped up and volunteered to help me run the organization with style and flare!

Marva: You've been a member of the WWG for a while. What benefits did you get from being a member?

JoJo: I moved to Eugene in May of 2001 and the first thing I did was join Willamette Writers. At $36.00 per year, it’s a screaming deal with free entry to the monthly speaker’s series and a discounted rate for the annual conference in Portland.

The speakers, regardless of genre, always have a nugget to impart that will improve everyone’s writing skill, from Cara Black’s information about using sensory details beyond just the visual to add depth to your writing to Jerry Oltions’s insight about using the “what if, if only or if this goes on, then…” elements to form the foundation of your story.

The bonus of joining Willamette Writers is that you get to meet some really great people and find support for your love of writing! You can meet and talk with other writer’s who know what you are going through whether you are just a beginning writer or a seasoned pro with many titles under your belt.

As a writer, you have to do the work alone, but it really helps the process when you can call on someone for support or ideas when you get stuck. It also helps to have allies when those inevitable rejection slips start rolling in. Writing is hard work—and with groups like Willamette Writers, you don’t have to do it alone.

Marva: You're an energetic person to say the least. What made you decide you wanted to take on the leadership role in the Eugene chapter?

JoJo: Thank you—I will embrace “energetic” as description of me!

Let me give you some background of the two women who have been running this chapter for the last seven years.

Patsy Hand decided to start this group to bring area writers together and Valerie Brooks volunteered to help her out. Together, they have done an amazing job bringing in a diverse range of speakers from screenwriters to best selling authors to literary agents, all with the aim to educate members to become stronger, more skilled writers.

Having been a member since 2001, I jumped at the chance to be part of this amazing, state wide group and am lucky enough to have time to devote to this venture. But…I’m not in it alone!

Pat Sweeney, my co-coordinator, is in charge of all things email. So if you want to receive our email info—she’s the gal to contact: pswilwrite@earthlink.net.

Sarah Decker is our very own graphic designer who does our chapter newsletter called the Hot Sheet, pulling together the content which includes announcements, classes, workshops, book signings and even services for writers, such as editors. She is also keeping track of the people who want to have a pitch practice before the big Willamette Writer’s conference in Portland in August.

I’m lucky to have found such terrific people who will help me continue what Val and Patsy started.

Marva: What's on the agenda for future meetings or at least what direction do you want to take the group?

JoJo: For the 2007-2008 series we have some great people lined up to speak from two successful screenwriters to well known literary authors and we will have a writer speaking on the delicate balance of ghostwriting! I have a couple of months yet to fill but we will release our schedule as soon as everyone is booked.

I do have some thoughts on what direction to take this group. First I want to build on what Patsy and Val have already done so beautifully—we just want to grow it! The Hot Sheet was the first thing we got going and we are kicking around the idea of our own website! It is also my mission to entice writers aged 20-50 to join us—I know you’re out there. I am also open to ideas and suggestions for what people are looking for—if two heads are better than one, then 4,000 heads must be amazing!

Marva: I understand that Willamette Writers is hosting a Writers Conference in August in Portland, Oregon. Tell us about it.

JoJo: From personal experience I can tell you that the conference is a MUST do for any serious writer! Not only are the classes and workshops first rate, but all the agents, editors and film people they bring in are a phenomenal way to network, pitch and get your name out in the publishing/film world.

For all the details on the classes, speakers and people whom you can pitch your manuscripts to, go to the WWG conference site. My only advice: sign up early for the pitch sessions because they go fast. The maximum is six and I suggest to everyone, sign up for as many as you can get.

Another piece of advice—practice pitching your story to someone who doesn’t know anything about it—so that your pitch is clear as a bell and you are prepared for any questions that the agent/editor/producer might ask.

My last piece of advice—I promise—Be Bold and have fun!

Mysterious maïa

This interview appeared originally in FilmFiler.com in March 2006. That site has sadly disappeared and maïa has allowed me to reprint it here.

If you have ever frequented any writing forum then you may well have been helped out by the mysterious maïa. As well as being incredibly helpful and approachable, she has her own site saysmom.com where you can view her essays and find out more about her thoughts and opinions. I asked her some questions to help new (and not so new) writers get started out.


Why did you decide to provide free mentoring to writers?
I can’t really remember when the idea struck me, as it was about 5 years back. Around 5 years before that, when I gave away all I owned, I’d decided to do nothing for money ever again, and wanted only to be useful in some way, for as long as I was stuck in this life. The thing I do best is write, so that seemed the best way to be useful. I had already been offering to help with any kind of writing and computer set-ups/organizing wherever I went - to homeless shelters, the Hopi tribe I lived among for a while, and kids in the South Bronx ghetto who were trying to change the world, among others. When I started house and pet-sitting, to provide a roof over my head, doing the same online seemed a natural segue.

What are the most common questions you are asked?
The 3 most common are probably: 1. ‘Is this any good?’; 2. ‘Will you please edit this for me?’ and 3. ‘How can I get my work published/produced?’.

1. pretty much speaks for itself. They’ll send a piece of work and ask if it’s good enough to send out or worth continuing to work on, and/or want to know if they show any promise at all as a writer, or not.

2. also is pretty straightforward. I’ll be sent a poem/story/article/essay/book excerpt or whatever that the writer knows needs ‘fixing’ in one way or another and knows he/she can’t do it her/himself. Sometimes only a bit of typo and other simple error catching is needed, but other times, up to a complete rewrite is called for. I don’t do people’s work for them, but do show what’s wrong and why, and suggest ways to /correct/improve it.

In re: 3 sadly, I often have to deliver the awful truth that the piece in question just isn’t marketable. In the cases where it’s not completely beyond hope, I’ll offer suggestions as to how to proceed, and send along tips from the pros that I’ve collected over the years.

What qualities should a writer aim to develop?
First, of course, the basic skills (grammar, spelling, punctuation, syntax) must be learned and honed to a professional level. Next, is an eye and an ear for being able to tell what is ‘good writing’ and what is not. This can only come from lifelong and constant reading of the best works by the best writers of all time, as well as those who are the most respected in today’s literary world - which does not mean the most popular! Along with the best, one must also sample the not so great and the actually awful, to be able to see the difference.

Should a new writer talk about what’s close to their heart or what will get them noticed by others?
There’s no one answer to that question - it depends on what they are writing and what they want to do with it. A good, seasoned writer will do both, naturally. I find that most new writers tend to place too much importance on one or the other, instead of just settling down to write the best story/book/whatever that they can. In the end, it’s only the writing that matters, not the writer.

Why do you not help writers who include violence in their work?
That’s not really accurate. I’ll help anyone, I just won’t help with any ‘work’ that contains violence. I work with many who first came to me with writing that had violent content and, after being told I can’t help with it, came back with things I could help them with. Basically, I won’t aid and abet using violence to entertain people. The reason is too involved to deal with here and can be understood better if one reads the essay ‘Why your money’s no good’ on my website.

Are there any other things which you think devalue the work of a writer?
Oh, sure. Poor skills heads the list! The excuse that what they’re saying is more important than how they say it doesn’t wash with me. A good writer will write well–period. Proselytizing also cheapens writing, often ruining what could’ve been a good story, if the writer wasn’t trying so hard to convert the readers. And, just tossing off cheap copies of their own work also annoys the heck out of me. ‘Pancake writers’ is what I call the Bob Ludlums and Stephen Kings and J. K. Rowlings of the publishing world’s heights. Believe it or not, I got the term from Ludlum himself, when I knew him back in my old life. He doesn’t kid himself, he established a good, best-selling format and just stuck to it. All he has to do is change the location and the name of the hero, keep up with the world news–et voila!–the latest NY Times best-seller.

You have some ‘works-in-progress’ on your site, how often do you work on these?
Not at all. They’ll most likely remain in w-i-p limbo forever.

Will you aim to get these published in other media than the internet?
No. Having long ago divested myself of ’self’, I ‘aim’ for nothing, let all happen as it will. If any of my work is meant to be published, it will be. Since I don’t do anything for money, I can’t very well sell it, can I? I’ll occasionally send something to a freebie e-zine, if it catches my eye, but I don’t go looking for anything.

What lies ahead for maia?
I’ve no clue, writing-wise, that is. I write what comes to me, what ’speaks’ to me and needs to be written/seen/known. I’m a philosopher first and foremost, studying and recording the behavior of this supposedly ’superior’ species seeming to be my main ‘assignment’. The writing help/mentoring is just a time-filler, really.

Aside from studying, writing and mentoring, I’m finally able to give up the house and pet-sitting [also done for free], and can have a place of my own to finish growing old in and enjoy being a hermit, which is how I’m most comfortable. I’ll be heading for the island of Tinian on December 20th (2006) and will most likely never leave there (bodily, that is). A woman asking for writing help dropped in my lap just as I found I couldn’t stay beyond a year in Canada and needed to find a new ‘gig’. I can afford to live there (in the farthest reaches of the Pacific!) on my own, thanks to a deceased ex-husband’s social security, so off I go. Many of the locals there need help with English, as well as tutoring for all school levels, so I don’t think I’ll find any lack of ways to be useful.

Thanks and Good luck with the future.


Sunday, April 22, 2007

David de Beer - Flash Man!

David de Beer was born in the year of Star Wars, called the Year of the Fire Serpent by some, 1977 by others. It was June 14, and probably very hot. He lives in Johannesburg, South Africa, and has had fiction appear in Alienskin, Nocturnal Ooze, Chizine, Flash me magazines and forthcoming in Shadowed Realms.

Visit David's blog and LiveJournal

Read David's lastest publication at Chizine: The Man Who Eats Angels. This is a gut-churner for sure, not for the faint-of-heart.

I asked David to describe Flash Fiction for me because he's been involved in the at a discussion level with several editors on the nature of flash fiction. What he's learned, I hope he'll pass on here.

Marva: Hi David. Thanks for stopping in to give my readers some insight into Flash Fiction. Since you've been studying the situation, first can you recommend some sites that feature flash fiction?

David: Ok, here are some good flash venues to keep track of, you'll see they each have a slightly different approach to flash:

Flash me
Shadowed Realms
Ravenelectrick
From the Asylum
Alienskin
Vestal Review
Ideomancer
Abyss & Apex

Of those, Shadowed Realms, Abyss & Apex, From the Asylum and Alienksin, have more of a preference to a linear standard story, the short-short in other words. Along with Flash me, they also have the longest word counts. Vestal and Raven have the shortest word counts and more of a preference for highly suggestive stories, rather than ones spelled out straight. You have to do get the same effect - complete story - in less space, so the writer needs to rely a great deal more on the reader being able to interpret his/ her writing. With flash, it isn't always what's said, but rather what 's not said, what is implied, that is the important part.

So, it's like poetry where you have to read between the lines as well.

Marva: How about using sites such as Duotrope and Ralan's to find venues?

David: I'd certainly recommend both and especially Duotrope for its search features. You can just ask for a list of publishers that take flash fiction. Duotrope has different categories, such as the short-short, and the drabble. You still need to specify which genre specifically you want, or you can just ask for "All" genres, and you get the whole list of markets open to shorter forms of writing. I don't use Ralan much, so I'm not sure about that site.

Marva: The BIG question. What is flash?

David: It's important to remember different people will likely give different interpretations, and I'm still new at this as well, so I'm no expert. But I did ask around, and all the editors pretty much said flash is word count. Now that differs from venue to venue, 1000, or 500, or 400. The cut-off mark was set at 2000, too long, in my opinion. I prefer a 1000 max.

People often abuse the notion of flash to mean vague mutterings, and hintings. What flash is not, is scenes from a hat (or a moment in the life of a person), or an atmospheric description of a scene. Unless that one scene is capable of suggesting an entire story, and fully fleshed characters.

It's flash FICTION - which means that the same rules apply - a definite story with a beginning, a middle, and an end.

Now, personal tastes dictate whether there is/is not resolution, and whether there is closure or the ending is open-ended.

But, like all stories, flash needs to suggest fully-realized characters, inhabiting a fully realized world.

The trick lies in the suggestions, the inferences that can be made. And that's also important regarding details/ lack of details - if the details can be inferred, then you don't need to explain them. If the lack of details lead to confusion, you've made a mistake and
need to re-address.

That last part - about lack of details that DO need to be elaborated on - is important. Flash is also not to be taken as a medium for writers who don't feel they have to do the work and provide only thumbnail sketches instead of full stories. Flash; short story; novel - they all require work, and a lot of background detail that never make it onto the page, but are crucial for the story to work. Flash doesn't have less detail in the prose, only less details explicitly spelled out. It doesn't take away the responsibility from the writer for telling a good tale, it's not the lazy writer's quickie.

Flash is, as its name says, a brief bang.

Novels are a journey, lasting over an extended period. Shorts are a thought, an idea explored and moved. Flash is a moment, a quick flash effect of emotion. An impulse, if you will. The Big Bang that contains an entire universe of matter within a small space.

Marva: I originally asked you a question on a crit you did on my work and you were good enough to go into a little more depth on flash. Do people want too much explained in a flash?

David: Hm yeah, to be honest, sometimes I wonder if that's not just a critter syndrome, like they feel they have to say something but they don't know what and then get overly anal about it. On the other hand, people who complain about flash, usually complain about shorts' lack of detail as well. It's a hard one. There's a lot more that has to be inferred from a flash piece, and much less is explicitly spelled out. A good rule of thumb in any writing, IMO, but crucial to flash writing. Of course, sometimes the story is just short. But it still needs to be a story, that's the bottom line, at least for me. Other people may feel different. It's a matter of reader preference of course; some readers want everything neatly tied up and clear, others enjoy putting the story together. There's no space in flash to explain events, you can only trust that you did enough for readers to draw the correct inference. But, much like poetry, that meaning can be subtly different from reader to reader. With flash, more than my other writing, I enjoy seeing how my critique group interpret the writing. It's interesting to view the broad similarities - which I view as a successful piece, i.e. they get what I was trying to say - but also the subtle differences, which is where the unique reader's take on a story comes from. They interpret based on their own frameworks of reference and that's fascinating to see, almost like an interactive form of writing.

Marva: What do you think is the most important thing to tell the author of a flash when you're critting?

David: The suggestions I've made, regarding cutting and re-phrasing, are suggestions that can also be used in all modes of fiction. There's no reason to write something longer than it has to be. Flash is wonderful for learning to write the maximum impact with the minimal words. What's excessive, can be cut. What's implied (e.g., 'he stood up,' can be 'he stood,' since standing usually implies movement in an upwards direction), what's implied does not need to be spelled out.

Mostly, I look for the sense of a complete story, that hard to define and obscure "impression" of a tale fully told. Now, you can use a moment to suggest an entire life, but it's hard to pull off.

By its nature, flash is the ultimate contra to telling, it has to be shown. Telling, as opposed to showing, takes too long, stretches the moment, and dampens the effect you could have achieved with flash.

Over time, the more you do it, the better you'll be able to realize when your story is a flash, a short, novella or novel. Sometimes a story needs to be expanded, sometimes to be hauled back in and tightened. There's no checklist for that, it works or it doesn't. Your readers will tell you, when they are satisfied that they have read a fully realized story, you've done your job, no matter what length or medium.

Ok, I'm going to stop here, otherwise it gets too confusing.

Marva: David, thanks for allowing me to post your concepts on flash. To me, they help a lot. One more thing. What about the MAM awards? When are you selecting the winners?

David: Ah, yes, the MAM's. The winners will be announced either in December or January, with nominations announced through the year.

The MAM's, or Martian Approved Marshmallows, will take some time to explain. You see, I'm a junior member of the Terran Diplomatic Corps for Intergalactic Relations, and we've been in close dealing with the Martians for some time. That should be little surprise to many people, nor the fact that the Martians are obviously no longer on Mars. They moved - to the Alpha-Gwham-Kwallahakipoyosidelksi-Lafleur system, where they occupy the planet, Button-Ten.

The Martians are very curious about earth society, especially earth women, and literature as well of course. Now, what we do is to try and send them as many representative samples of earth writing as we can, but the TwixStar bandwidth is very limited and needs to be used for so many different things, that we were forced to make choices. Erotica, for instance, occupies about 65% of the bandwidth allocated to literature, and Westerns another 20%. Martians love cowboys. They're not too fond of Dan Brown, though. Well, that doesn't leave much for the other genres, and I'm also the only member of the Corps who reads SF, Fantasy and Horror. The job of selecting some of the best in contemporary samples fell to me by default, I'm afraid, not based on any degree of skill or proven good taste.

I'm only one person, and there's only so much I can read and, like I said, I have the least space of anyone. So, what I'll be doing all year is to compile a shortlist - the "nominations" - that I feel will be representative of decent spec fic reads, and at the end of the year, I'll announce the "winners", which is of course the stories - or marshmallows, as the Martians call them - that will be sent off to the Martians.

I'll be making my selections based upon the various short fiction magazines and such novels as I do read throughout the year.

The "winners" will receive cyber-smileys and the warm glow in the heart of doing a good deed.

And that's the story behind the Mam's, but mum's the word, so don't spread it around.

Monday, April 16, 2007

Kids' Books - Monkey Play!


I'm very excited to present this interview by an unusual childrens' book author. MonkeyJohn sprang from the imagination of John Bushore. John's latest book, writing as himself is "Friends in Dark Places." You can read my review of the book here.

MonkeyJohn, the only primate native to the Great Dismal Swamp, lives with his friend, John Bushore, occupying the penthouse suite of the Top Banana Building. He is the author of the children's book, "What's Under the Bed?" and former editor of MonkeyJohn-dot-Banana, an internet children's magazine. His short stories and poems have appeared in KidVisions and the quarterly print magazine, Beyond Centauri, including the "SpaceMonkey" series.

John will be at Ravencon, April 20-22, in Richmond Virginia. I assume he'll be bring MonkeyJohn with him. If you live in that neck of the woods, drop on over.

See John's and MonkeyJohn's Website Here


Marva: Hello, Mr. Monkey or is that Mr. John?

MJ: It’s one word. I’m the only monkey in the Great Dismal Swamp, the top banana so to speak. I don’t need a last name.

Marva: Let's get down to business. You live at the edge of the Great Dismal Swamp with John Bushore. Do you give him kitchen privileges? Okay, just kidding about that. I'm sure you treat him very well. I assume you were precocious monkey, so what was the first thing you wrote?

MJ: John Bushore, a writer of novels, moved to a house on the edge of the swamp a few years back, was moved to write a poem by the 9-11 tragedy. He found, to his surprise, that he enjoyed writing poetry, that it was fun. He would wander around his property making up silly rhymes and I’d come out of the swamp to listen to him. Eventually, I learned to tolerate him.

John (or Hey, You, as we call him around here) sent in a poem called Mare Insanitatus and it became published in the Martian Wave, his first acceptance ever. Well, I couldn’t let Hey, You one-up me, so I wrote and sent in a couple of spooky poems when Mr. Tyree Campbell put out a call for submissions to the December issue of his magazine Kisses for Kids. This was in ’02.

Marva: How did you decide to become a children's book writer? After all, your room mate, John, writes some pretty scary stuff.

MJ: Well, Mr. Tyree Campbell (my hero, by the way) accepted those two aforementioned poems and said maybe he’d do a special Halloween issue the next year. I mentioned that I’d like to do a book of poems someday and Mr. Tyree Campbell said, “Hey, I’ve just become a publisher, let’s do it.” I bluffed and said I had bunches of poems (I just didn’t mention they were all still in my head.) So I wrote a few dozen poems and Mr. Tyree Campbell selected several to put in the book, which became “What’s Under the Bed.” Which is how I became a PUBLISHED AUTHOR long before Hey, You did.

Marva: Your first book, "What's Under the Bed," is about what?
(Note: What's Under the Bed is sold at the Genre Mall. Look in the Poetry section.)

MJ: Um, it’s a little bit of everything as far as kid’s poetry goes, but it pretty much has a fantasy theme. There’s dragons, unicorns, a haunted house in a carnival, and it really does reveal what’s under the bed. Most of the poems are pretty funny and parents say they enjoy them as much as their kids do.

Marva: What is a picture book exactly?

MJ: I can answer that easily, seeing that I’m in the publishing “Biz” as we call it. It’s a book of simple prose or poetry, accompanied by drawings that “illustrate” the text. Books from major publishers are almost always 32 pages in length, with the first two pages reserved for title, credits, etc. Surprisingly these publishers don’t pay their authors in bananos (the Euro of the Dismal Swamp.)

Marva: What do you have coming up next?

MJ: I have a new picture book manuscript called “The Lost Ginger Whale,” a book-length poem telling how the Sand Witch and the Cat o’Nine Tales search for their friend Ginger Whale who has left their beach home in search of whatever lonely whales search for. They meet up with such characters as the great crashing boar, the dark horse and his mayor, a loan shark, kissing grammys, and Billy the Fish (who’s rather dumb because he never went to school.) Despite numerous clues, they can’t find Ginger, and they are sad. But then Ginger comes swimming up out of the depths and she brings a surprise.

I’m also adapting some of my “SpaceMonkey Adventures” for picture book format.

Hey, You will be sending out queries soon, since he handles my mail and keeps my swarms of adoring fans away by using fly spray.

Marva: Do you do your own illustrations or do you have a stable of illustrators chained in the basement? If so, would you tell us who they are so their families won't worry about them?

MJ: Since you brought it up, we do have a stable, which contains 3 horses, 24 hens, 1 very lucky rooster, and the Spanish Black Turkeys, Archie and Edith.

But I do NOT have illustrators chained in the basement. First off, we don’t have basements here in the swamp because they’d flood and then we’d have to call the alligator exterminator. Secondly, they keep the illustrators in Mr. Tyree Campbell’s basement where this guy without a name, J, comes by and whips them now and then. The illustrators for “What’s Under the Bed” were Marcia Borell, Sandy DeLuca, Erin Donahoe, Jennifer Cawthorne and Teri Santitoro. And the cover was done by another person without a name, 7ARS. (I think she’s related to R2-D2)

Marva: What else would you like to tell my readers? Anything at all! Go!

MJ: Why are you calling me MJ? If you’re not careful, I’ll lose my name like J and 7ARS.

Marva: Sorry, I wish you'd said something at the start of the interview.

MonkeyJohn: There was once a very young boy who dearly loved spending time with his Uncle John. But then his older brother and cousins told him that all people are descended from monkeys and the man he called Uncle John was really MonkeyJohn, the monkey everybody came from. The young boy believed them and called his uncle MonkeyJohn from then on.

And it’s true; MonkeyJohn is the progenitor (betcha didn’t think a monkey knew a big word like that) of all intelligent life. He also wrote the very first poem:

Evolution
by MonkeyJohn

A fish walked from the sea one day,
while I sun-bathed at the shore.
I was surprised to hear him say,
“My feet are really sore.”

“My legs appeared a week ago,
and I really was surprised
to find myself evolving so,
before my very eyes.”

And then he said goodbye to me,
for he wished to see the world.
He said he hoped to climb a tree,
and turn into a squirrel.

But as he left, he warned me, too.
“Don’t you stay ‘til after dark.
I’d leave the beach, if I were you;
behind me walks a shark!”

Marva: Thanks for swinging by, MonkeyJohn. Say hi to John from me.

MonkeyJohn: Whew, being interviewed is tough work. I think I’ll wander into the swamp and eat some marsh mallows. Thanks, Marva. As we say in the publishing biz, “Toodles.”